My Love for Her

mi linda amor

My Love for Her

 

My emotions 

so strong,

I’m drawn.

Propelled, 

without sight.

 Love is blind,

A loss of words,

from an empty mind.

All I can think,

is of you.

I wish, 

I pray, 

and even yearn.

But 

I’m not sure.

If I can sustain
  a stillborn void,

I laugh,

I cry,

If not all of it.

Hopefully,

a casual conversation,

and occasionally,

exchanges of smiles.

then some of you

if not all,

your inner beauty

 That fills 

a heart with joy.

 a gift 

comes in your presence

I’m buried

I can’t lie,

Overwhelmed

With a desire 

some call  puppy love,

love ai first sight

that's my dilemma

but You

so near,

Yet afar.

maybe just a dream

Always full of life,

But,

here comes the sun

 with all my might,

gone is night

For now

we have light

its a new day

I was unable to convey.

because I'm sill in a daze

With my earnest strength,

as i wonder, 

was it a dream.

I have to say

if it was true

through,

that mighty hue,

an abstract view, 

 of you.

if it were true,

would I love you.

 

 

Author's Note

i wrote this a long time ago its a lot of women I've know anyway enjoy and thank you for reading

Reviews

[emmajoy]

It's beautiful, it's love .. and, you mean every word.

Sending you prayers.

[Akshat♥]

very nicely written..i think you should tell her about your feeling...
as always i liked your work...keep writing:)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

beautiful! simply beautiful!

[Art Sun]

falling i n love my friend?...nice touch...

[littlelilypurplebride]

aww this is so sweet and heartfelt, so much emotions i love how paint the beauty of the passions of your heart upon this paper so well. god bless lily

[Marie Harrison]

So sweet....you know Valentines Day is around the corner. Maybe you should tell her. Lovely poem.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a very beautiful heartfelt poem.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautiful romantic poem! I hate to tell you Mauricie you're in love!

[Ice QueenJen]

Very sweetly written and nicely done. You show what is in your heart, yet unsure of the outcome. If we don't take a chance..... then what good would living be?

great poem Mauricio, a few misspelled words but you conveyed how you feel nicely!

[Stef Outsiders]

Wow, this is a unique piece of work, i love the format and the style, Wonderful!