Our Future

Soulmate, kiss of fate, brought us together, we know. The hands of time, slip by and by, into the future we go

Reviews

[jade sonder]

Short and simple, yet so powerful. I've read this many times and it will stick with me. Wonderful work!

[Hollywood]

It's a cute poem. However, I suggest breaking it up in lines, it makes it easier to read. Good poem though.

[fate.xlovex.hope]

yes, it just popped in my head and it relates to me hope it relates to others as well.

[Joe]

This is, to me, like an iceberg. There's not much on top, but beneath the surface there is so much! I really like the first two lines " Soulmate, kiss of fate" Such a fast and well-done rhythm and rhyme. Great job! Keep it up!

[A]

I really like this. I think if you added to it, it would be a great poem. It's a great start. :)