Imagine

What do you think?

The things I imagine,

The things in my brain,

Are all a bit silly,

But I think them all the same.

Sometimes it's raining,

Sometimes it's sunny,

Sometimes it's sad

And sometimes it's funny.

One week I'm a superhero,

One week I'm a cat,

One day I'm a winner,

One day I'm a hat.

So you see,

I imagine things,

That only I know,

Because sometimes I'm the bread,

And sometimes I'm just the dough.

 

 

Author's Note

I really enjoyed writing this poem so I hope you enjoy reading it. I would like to be rated so I can see what I can improve in.

Reviews

[Greg Close]

"Because sometimes I'm the bread,
And sometimes I'm just the dough."
Great line! I love the spirit of this poem, it's very uplifting. I read it and couldn't help the smile spreading on my face. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Imagination is necessary to keep us content and our dreams alive. I like the flow of the poem and the fun statements. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[piggy]

an easy 100 for you here.
very clever use of words and the colour adds beauty beyond the words.

keep up the great work.

[Lime-Eater]

This is Very good! I LOVE this one! This is going to my Favorites! :)

[Judy Ponceby]

I can relate to this quite well. :) Enjoyed it very much. I think periods instead of commas are more appropriate, just a thought :)