How Ifeel about you.

Im not sure

How I feel about you

 

When I first met you, you were different to what you are now.

You were understanding, and honest, and well, funny.

Yeah, sure you are funny now, but the question is, can I trust you?

Can I tell you secrets that you wont share?

Or what about you caring for me? Will you stop and wait for me?

I don't think so.

I suppose since I sort of moved away, you changed when you met her.

I was not going to worry. You could look after yourself.

Now we are back again I start to get worried.

How do I know we aren't just going round in circles?

Though I will give it a try.

Because life is meant for trying.

Author's Note

Sorry for the bad spelling and grammer. Try to focus on the words.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The questions of life. Old wise saying. "One time a mistake. Two times you are a fool. Three times you are a dummy." Life is a fair journey. We need to trust the people in a life. No trust. You will be waiting for a problem to re-birth. A very good poem. Open the door to many questions. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[georgie.porgie.13]

wow! is that about someone doing that to you?

[Maya Storm]

We get hurt, we give second chances. It is always good to try again, but it's also good to shield your heart.

I liked it very much, it was very expressive of what is felt.

[Stormy Weather]

Hmm.....when people who we care about and/or trust change, it can be tough. All part of growing up though, right? I don't really know. Wondering if you can trust someone can be a hard question to find the answer to. And you're right, life is meant for trying, sometimes.

[∂αʌ<..]

i can easily relate to this...many times in life we ask this question: can we trust him or her?? and i think like Coyote said rightly, we must trust our instincts and trust the one we have faith one!
a wonderful poem!

[Keevan]

Wonderful. I can't think of any other words to describe this besides wonderful and magnificent. Thanks for sharing. Keep on writing!

[Calypso]

Great flow

[frozensakura]

i love it (:

[Alicia Hirshey]

i like this a lot.

[TheMizFit]

A lot of people could relate to this! Well done :)