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thoughts of you
          seeps through my mind
thoughts of you
                 restraining my desire
my fingers
        caressing the petals of love
pulling back each leaf
                       until it reaches the
                waterfall
crying out softly in relief
to take you past your limits
                       to open your buds
                                  to pleasures unimagined
to take you from
                           no, no, no,
                                   to       
    do that again
to take you to
                                 the edge

Reviews

[J.Black]

Ya, this was awesome. I honestly have to say I could picture in my mind what was going on. Nice movie you created for me to watch. "caressing the petals of love"

[HoorayForUnderdog]

very good imagery, G !

you rock!