A GOOD MAN

I use to think that I was 

       a good man

then I fell in love

                     once

it was to bad

    she was already damaged

and didn't believe

                       that love would come around

I use to think I was

      a good man

but my daughter

                   grew up without me

i use to think  I was

                a good man

then I fell in love

                     again

I went off to save

                   the world

and then I lied

I use to think I was

         a good man

and now

I don't think

     I was ever a good man

Reviews

[Rain]

I really like this. If you don't read it right, you miss how profound this piece is. It's a very honest write. Rain..

[Emily B]

You have a tremendous voice. Looking forward to reading more when I get the chance. . .