LOVE, HUH

                       I

i have graduated

        to the next level

i cut the journey short

       love hurts

tie me

        cut me

             beat me                now

so when your gone

     so will the hurt

                    II

  i attempt to narcotize myself

      i didn't  know i did that

thank you psych class 113

i attempt to narcotize my self

    acid

       mummies

                       weed

                        alcohol

                                  sex

i attempt to narcotize myself

   love

        pain

               sex

sex

       love

              pain

sex.... pain

     teeth, nails,       scratching, digging

searching 4 love

       the worst kind of junkie

sex pain......   love

        im lost

i attempt to narcotize myself

im addicted to you

     OD

 

Reviews

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This is ridiculously nice. ^^
I love the setup, repetition, subject, last line ("im addicted to you").
Just awesome.
And I learned a new word (narcotize)!

Wow... I just want to read it over and over. :]