CUPID

what would you have done?

i am damaged goods

      so i've been told

damaged by love

       betrayed by love

                  almost ruined by love

chasing love

     running from love

stop

 look

             here it comes

                love

i am damaged goods

       so i've been told

so I went looking

              for that bow and arrow guy

i beat him down

                               why

he shot me

 

 

                   with an arrow

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

This is cute. I like it a lot, very creative.

[Rain]

lol. I liked this piece. Once you get struck my that love arrow, I guess we are damaged goods. Very clever.
I usually don't pay much attention to spelling, but you just left the "a" out on "damged." Good job, G. Rain