What about me?

What do they see, when they look at me?

It's hard to know, what really shows.

 

What sets me out? Do I stand from the crowd?

I just want believe, that I'm really me.

 

Is it a blessing? What am I missing?

Are things really as they seem?

 

Why can't I tell, if I belong in hell?

Can others see, what I'm meant to be?

 

Putting up the fight. to be in your sight.

I want to know, do I really show?

 

What do they see, when they look at me?

I just want to be seen as me...

Author's Note

I'd really like feedback. It will really help me develop my skill, if I have any.

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

I would say that this piece was written skillfully. It's a wonderful flow of reflection. The voice of the mind wondering what other's see when they look at the individual. I find that the ink is well contrived and flows nicely on the page. Good Job!

Aaron

[Cierra]

Thank you so much. Your comment really just made my desire to continue writing so much stronger.