tragic drop

..cold summer...

my heart is melting
as rain does in every fall
drowned in tragedy.

Author's Note

..I wanna hear your thoughts
=]

Reviews

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

you must find an old man singing xmas carols and he will hand you a business card..do NOT under any circumstances take it..but memorize the number.

[shunik]

haha lol
exactly ;p

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

I thought this might have been old news, but had to be sure

[shunik]

I guess for some
..I don't know how you arrived at such a review
haha
just a thought

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

luck? haha

[shunik]

no..
it's just that the theme is so tragic and you had a humorous review
haha
anyhow, its unique
=]

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

nah I just regurgitated something historical cause I'm a thesbian

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

nah, I'm the same as everybody else; we're all the same haha

[Myra]

A lot has been conveyed in these few lines and I love it!

[shunik]

thanks
;p

[Amata Luna]

Short in sweet; only the "sweet" part is rather full of emotion and a thousand more goes right into my head and heart. I love the way you put that picture. It did add gravity to your work. Keep it up. :)

[shunik]

t.y
;p

[Max_E_Stone]

Wow! Beautiful. The picture combined with your soulful lines brought tears to my eyes

[shunik]

thanks
;p

[astronaut]

I like the picture and this seems very deep and tragic. :) Nice

[eeoopig]

You put so much meaning into few words - good work.

[Renée]

thoughts... heartache..

[dan nacario]

excellent imagery..

[Jordan A. Wilson]

imagery and depth. very nice.