Lyrico

I wanna rock out
slammin' chords with endless rhymes
wrecking in my veins.

Reviews

[kc]

then do it don't write

[RaspberryBullets]

It's his way of expressing, I'm sure you have your own ways as well. Don't criticize other people's way of writing unless you have a good reason. A simple haiku and picture can change, inspire and portray how an artist feels.

[Max_E_Stone]

Nice haiku, a great deal of feeling!! You said what you needed to say and it was great. It make me want to pump up my music right now lol. Great job!

[shunik]

haha
thanks
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[astronaut]

Cool. :) Even though it's short it has a lot of feelings.

[Celestial Witch Child]

Awesome. (:

[Renée]

Lots of passion in a few words....Senyru isn't it?

[shunik]

hm yeah
thanks
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[dan nacario]

very expressive poem..

you rock!! :)

[shunik]

salamat dan
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[dan nacario]

you're welcome..

[Pax]

you rock, let everything out through music is a good release.

[shunik]

thanks Willy
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[Gene Hiccup]

hmmm. it seems you want to release something out of your system...a negative emotion perhaps?

[shunik]

yes Gene it's phatetic
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[Jordan A. Wilson]

play on, guitar.

[shunik]

haha
I love that
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[Layla J Omorose]

This was really good. Simple and yet has the power of the five stanza poem. Good job

[shunik]

thank you Layla
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