LET GO

..let me hear you whisper..

My thoughts are turnin'
Feels like it's burnin'
Livin' the power of desire
that makes me so high
did you ever know
how your words inspired me so?
Let it go, let it flow
I wanna rock but
I'm not a funk
Creatin' this soul
enthusiast my young spirit
you're true oh
you're so true.. .
lightin' me up to
a handful war of beatin'
slippirin' words
out of my head
you're a song that seems
a dream to be so real
ain't movin' on
to wake up
just countin' on every music
from your voice to fill me twice
li'l consciousness then I found
so decide to have a sudden.. .

STOP.

-musicfunk-

Author's Note

..dedicated to avril lavigne's album "let go"
..this poem just popped up as I found some writing stuff of her in the old magazines..
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Reviews

[RachelReaper]

I was going to say that this sounded kind of like a song

[Sasha]

wow. It would make a great song. Cool indeed.

[Renée]

Sounded like a song reading it ... nice

[Max_E_Stone]

I love it! Great job!

[manifesto]

I can feel the power that music holds flowing through these words. Great work!

[shunik]

thanks =]

[Jetta Zippora]

I feel passion and a strong rhythm combined in this one as I read it aloud. Great write! :)

[shunik]

thank you jet
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[Heromen Selena]

I LOVE AVRIL LAVIGNE. I HAVE THIS CD! Sorry I got overly excited. Okay great job with the poem. I liked the contractions your used in it. Nicely done!

[shunik]

haha,thanks
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[Barbara Walker]

great song!

[RaspberryBullets]

You truly are a beautiful writer. Excellent work! I love it! :) xox

[shunik]

thank you =]

[_]

Beautiful! Fanfriggintastic! You write beautifully! :3

[shunik]

whoa,what a word
thanks=]