LET GO

..let me hear you whisper..

My thoughts are turnin'
Feels like it's burnin'
Livin' the power of desire
that makes me so high
did you ever know
how your words inspired me so?
Let it go, let it flow
I wanna rock but
I'm not a funk
Creatin' this soul
enthusiast my young spirit
you're true oh
you're so true.. .
lightin' me up to
a handful war of beatin'
slippirin' words
out of my head
you're a song that seems
a dream to be so real
ain't movin' on
to wake up
just countin' on every music
from your voice to fill me twice
li'l consciousness then I found
so decide to have a sudden.. .

STOP.

-musicfunk-

Author's Note

..dedicated to avril lavigne's album "let go"
..this poem just popped up as I found some writing stuff of her in the old magazines..
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Reviews

[Harley (arbiter)]

I liked the ending. Nice visuals. I don't like that kind of music but eh. Anyway nice job man

[shunik]

well, thanks Arbiter for being the first to review my work
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....

[shunik]

..I'll return the favor
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[Harley (arbiter)]

your welcome ^_^ and you don't have too.

[shunik]

I already did
haha
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