GREEN LEMON

...transcendentalism...

tiny stem towards the sky
with great spunky spiny thorns
has built the courage of
scented leaves
his upward dream
of rapid growth
seems so honorable
that even storms and thunders
hardened his soul
gleam the spines when
sunlight strike
behold the armor of
this warrior plant.

-musicfunk- 

Author's Note

..daydreaming in the morning
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Reviews

[Danielle]

Lovely!

[shunik]

thanks
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[Danielle]

Your welcome

[RachelReaper]

this is about a rather unusual topic, but you made it work by describing its growth and its strength. Creative juices were working on this one, I can tell :)

[dan nacario]

nice poem..unique and imaginative

[Max_E_Stone]

Good read! I could see everything!

[Renée]

Very Good ! I could almost smell the tree blooming and I remember those spines on the lemon tree ! A cleansing breath to read thank you !

[writing mojo]

This poem is precision at it's finest measure, very symbolic inspiration in the process of growth..

[Mal]

This poem shows how differently you view the stuff around you. Exactly what a good writer needs. Cool. Keep going :D

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like this, nice nature write.

[manifesto]

This was such a powerful and inspirational piece. Don't stop daydreaming! :)

[shunik]

thank you A.E.S
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[Barbara Walker]

Inspiration for writing can come from anywhere and nature is abundant with subjects. I like your ode to a lemon!