don't fall inlove with a dreamer

8.21.14

for she shall be forever floating
in a rabbit-hole of daydreaming
with the hope of clearest sky,
hides a shadow vast as mountain,
that drizzle rain of long-ago,

in your never-ending chance of waiting,

but sshh! calm down and sit awhile,

here she comes with a sparkling smile.

Author's Note

irony of oneself

Reviews

[Sasha]

I love these line.

"but sshh! calm down and sit awhile,
here she comes with a sparkling smile."

Very moving. Great poem. :D

[shunik]

thank you for the review..

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

I really like this, sentences rhyme like that it's enjoyable to read. =)

[Andrew N. Farrens]

I wish I had a she with a sparkling smile and an irony of herself. A great poem. Thanks for sharing......

[shunik]

haha. and thanks for the review my friend :)

[Tomás Ó C..]

we are all dreamers... you must be to write...

[G!o]

There is always beauty in the not so strained poetry and liken this one here i would love to read over and over again. When i first read the title, i was anticipating to find the normal type of heartbreak poetry but i bow to this. Amazing write.

[shunik]

thank you sir

[Bluefire]

Beautiful and a little sad.
Very well played!

[shunik]

thanks for the review

[Bluefire]

No problem

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I can only imagine the secrets that lie behind those eyes.
Crystal clear vivid imagery is all I saw.

[shunik]

thanks for the review

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree but a person with a sparkling smile and joy in their walk. Tempt the observer.
"in your never-ending chance of waiting,
but sshh! calm down and sit awhile,
here she comes with a sparkling smile."
Above lines. Perfect closing to the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[shunik]

thank you sir for the review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.