DON’T FALL INLOVE WITH A DREAMER: Slippin’ chances

6.5.2017

Seeing in the eyes of your mind

a dreamer you are,

too I am.

 

when waves tell the story

and utter without words,

such mutuality is rare,

 

odd to life-defining views,

for two curiosers

to share a world bizarre,

 

secrets but unhide

the gamble to meet

half of you.

 

                                  

Author's Note

it takes few months to finish this one...
It's actually a sequel of my first poem here: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/titintambing/1502114/

Enjoy reading!

Reviews

[M Garcia]

Nicely done. Flows well. :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A tender yet powerful piece that glides within the spice in all of us, the dreamer, how ferule a creature, well done, good read.

[shunik]

thank you sir for the kind review

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, powerful and worthwhile words dear Christine. A wanderer, dreamer and wild soul cannot be held down. Your words true and beautiful. Thank you Christine for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[shunik]

thank you sir for the review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure dear friend and you are welcome.