….LINGER...

Through the windows I see lots of mystery,

As the rain was fallin’ my heart was fillin’ with love,

The words my mind keep on singing..

Oh! Every beat seems hanging on..

Collides to my soul makes me wonder..

How could I ever be so obsessed?..

To the world I knew can’t resist.

Eternal passion from the unknowing..

And then my kryptonite was found!..

Bestowed upon me with desire,

Surrounded me in solitude.

I think I’m in love?!..

Crept shouts of real tune…

I think I’m in love!!!..

Every whip becomes beat….

I think I’m in love..

Shuffled words turned into lyrics..

..can’t fight it either..

Through days and nights of uncertainty..

Unto my dreams it dawdle..

..a love song I suppose,

I commit myself to reunite.

‘finally found my way to deep within..

Of tears and smiles..

Either high or dry…

I’m still in love with music!!!…

-musicfunk-

Author's Note

..be gentle of your reviews...

Reviews

[irishprincess]

that was really good!!!:)

[Joshua]

A very nice piece overall.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is a gorgeous write! Truly beautiful imagery...you make your love of music come to life. love it! :)

[ducky(:]

i like it:)

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Awesome!

[EMF]

Sorry, but I'm not going to be gentle. I'm not going to soften things so I don't bruise your ego. I bloody loved it. It is a little disjointed here and there, but it works perfectly, perhaps because of that. It has a language play that just leaves me speachless (but still able to type). Your imagry is spectacular. Your love, unquestioned. A truly fine and wonderful write.

[realmwriter]

A bit all over the place which oddly enough works.Very cool man.

[Coyote Poetry]

Music is always a good friend. Can take you to places and relax the mind. I like the many strong statements in this poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote