Paint Me A Picture

Paint me a picture,

In colors bright and vivid,

of a world without hatred,

a world without greed.

Paint me a picture,

in a water color piece,

of a world were there was no war,

only love and peace.

Paint me a picture,

with pallets of oil paints,

where any simple human,

could be mistaken for a saint.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

I have no words......my voice is in my awe!! Well done!

[Helena Aurellia]

This is simple yet beautiful! The rhyme scheme makes everything more pleasing. Keep up the good work xoxo

[A.M. Franck]

This is simply beautiful! Nice job!

[Gee]

If only, like this, simple poem with a wish of millions

[Tamika]

This is so beautiful! I love how well it flows and I especially love the imagery and message that you showed in this piece! I really like how you started each stanza with the line "paint me a picture". You really did paint a picture for me with your stunning words. A really excellent poem, you should be incredibly proud!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the use of the word "paint". Would be nice if we could paint a picture and paint the world into a better place. Thank you Tiarra for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[LaCherish T.]

This is really good! I love the repetition and rhyme scheme! Personally, I find it hard to write happy, nice and rhyming pieces, kudos to you girl! :p Plus your line two lines a a-frickin-mazing! You're telling a story and a pleasant one at that.