WHY ME

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                     WHY ME?

 

 Why did you choose me out of a million girls?

 

Do you really love me?

 

Am i really your number one?

 

Where ever we go and if we see a girl you flirt with them that makes me debate if you really love me!

 

Thats not love when you figure out what it is tell me?

 

Love is gentle your rough love is calm your not i gave it up to you and know thats all you want thats not really love at all!

 

 

Reviews

[Collect-Eye]

this is really a blog, not a poem
a poem is a re-wording of reality w/ metaphors and/or imagery, not just a summarization in plain English
if it's prose it should have twists and turns
if it's lyrical it should have an angelic quality
etc etc etc...
not asking you to be as abstract as me or anyone else, but give me something that makes me think
and someone can judge me for posting this, but I was sent a friend request w/out being given the courtesy of a review
sometimes criticism is necessary to help someone grow
good poetry doesn't happen over night and it takes a good balance of desire ingenuity and effort
if you wanna help solve your man problems, start w/ yourself
start by empowering yourself and building your self image
ask him if he's really flirting or just being friendly, you'll understand his answer by his emotional state when you ask.
if he turns out to be a d****e, dump him and focus on yourself til someone better comes along.
I could be like most people and placate you and pat your back ,but what's the point.
There's a time to be superficial and a time to speak about reality

[CC]

In today's day with the lack of self esteem that is commonly cultivated in not just young women, but young men as well, by many different variables (depending on race, class, geo...) this is a rite of passage... it either make you wiser, or it makes you paranoid. sad but true.

[Molafvt]

Welcome to the real world Tizzy. Now that you know, try and make better choices in the future. It is sad but life is sometimes about learning hard lessons. If you haven't yet gotten rid of that bum, do it...!

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love starts with yourself..this person isnt doing this to you...your letting them do to you...Start loving and respecting you ..you don't deserve to be loved any else that the next person...

[The Warrior Poet]

Well... One must know the difference between love and lust. There's a time and place for each and there's a time and place for BOTH (at the same time). It's debatable.

I love Lust. And I lust for Love. It's ponderable.

[Tate Morgan]

hello tizzy A nice thought isnt it

[koty bell]

will you read some of my stuff and tell me what u think

[tizzy k]

thanks

[koty bell]

i liked it it showed alot of realism

[ClosingAccount]

Amazing great

5 STARS

[Liza]

there comes a time when we all ask ourselves this question
and in order to keep our serenity and sanity
we must value ourselves as worthy
comparing our worth stacked up against another
will never allow us to feel adequate and secure within our skin
because really - its just skin we are evaluating
when we look deeper into our personality; our heart, the way our mind works and the ways we love and are loved
we start to ask these questions less and less to another
because when we are appreciating the life force in us
we don't wait for another to appraise us