nauture haiku

a poen for my class

Nature Haiku
Green grass in April
Birds begin to sing in trees
Children playing outside

Reviews

[Amy R]

i like the attempt but this isn't in a haiku format,
haiku is usually written in 3 lines and the syllables go as 5, 7, 5.
It only consist of 17 syllables if its a haiku.
maybe u should change this to a short poem.