Invisibilty

My best friend and worst enemy

    My invisibility is my best friend.

           Kind to me.

                 Letting me go unnoticed.

          and hiding my embaressment.

It is also my worst enemy.

    Denying me friends.

             Revealing me at the worst times.

                          Never letting me be myself.

  I hate it.

          I love it.

   I'm trapped

                But I must live with it.

    Do I?

                      I can never know.

              Because

   I will never try.

      I will never suceed.

  Invisibilty is many things to me.

      Freedom is not one of them.

 

                    

 

Author's Note

This was part of my homework in English. When graded, the only word on there was "wow..." What do you think?

Reviews

[PhantomDancer]

Excellent theme, very mature for one of your age!

[TheActOfRandomness(:]

Wow is right, I loved it!

[Eric Cox]

Great poem about wanting to not be noticed but realizing you miss things when you're this way.