Mind F***

Out of sorts
In the throes of nothing.
Emptiness distorts reason.

A radical choice.

Self loathing
Instant gratification.
Is there even a choice?

Reviews

[Pete]

satisfying in a disturbing kind of way. like a convoluted conundrum. damned if you do & damned if you don't. deep, philosophical and very telling. i like it ... :)

[Jibey]

Short and to the point, this piece strikes home with its telling message.

[Everett DeValle]

This resonated with me in so many ways...I feel almost everyone nowadays with technology expects instant gratification that there is generations with entitlement issues...I've come from the old school to earn happiness and at times without expectations...the process is fun part...hope all is well Tops!

[Nwang]

Short, chaotic and deep. Excellent poetry, its like having a philosophical argument with one's self.

[??????]

There is a choice within it all , its called balance. Very spoken write.