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boredom

stillness of the river, dying like the coolness of the snow.
his breath as sweet as the burning flame of the phoenix's breath of fire...
hatred passing through the veins in their hearts..
screaming as passionately as the fire trapped in his soul.
thoughts of emptiness occupying the mind of the boy...
fleeting in painful agony, the crow starts to caw...
the dying breath of the king's only heir to the throne,
crying rings through the palace walls..
a brave boy.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Epic emotions...like flash fiction in a poem, Lovely...miss you Tops...I hope all is well my friend. :)

[Nankoto]

That was an awesome write. I love all the detail you put into it!

[[~.*.~] Sherri Blossom ..]

Wow! That was amazing! You detailed it very well, and it captivated me from beginning til end. Lovely work here!

♥ Sherrice