Lil Gothic Angel

i wrote this for a friend of mine before.. she loves gothic stuff, so i wrote her a "gothic" poem.. if you can call it that, lol

sweet love divine

lips taste like luscious wine

a look, never quite put out before

intensity of the eyes

seem to burn the heart's core

a mere human, but so much more.

a longing look is what it took

to gaze upon this intimate beauty

a look of innocence and of purity.

gothic angel that's what ima call her

she can make ice turn into water

her stare, her glare, people beware

this gothic angel's a mystery beyond compare

not in your wildest dreams

will you meet anyone like her

she's one of a kind

do nothing to spoil her..

Reviews

[[~.*.~] Sherri Blossom ..]

Wow, that was certainly an interesting poem! Much better than I could write :P I loved how you expressed and described the lil gothic angel, I think what makes it not as gothic as Legion suggests is because of the cuteness in it, but that's fine, I still enjoyed the read :D

♥ Sherrice

[Legion]

Well, I wouldn't call it gothic even if you do use the word in it, but I hope she likes it for you. :)