Insomnia

Fighting the surge of despair as it passes through me.

Wave after wave I struggle to pull through.

You’ve caught me in a blinding blur of fury

Caught up in my own misery.

Save me from the stench of the green-eyed monster

Lost in the depths of the crowd.

Help me.. Free me from the strains of fleeting agony

Climbing up on top of me.

Free me from its binding hold

Let me sleep for eternity.

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[RAWR!]

'Fighting the surge of despair as it passes through me.
Wave after wave I struggle to pull through.
You’ve caught me in a blinding blur of fury'

wow dude

'Save me from the stench of the green-eyed monster'
if you are able, please tell me who the green eyed monster is i am very curious.

'Lost in the depths of the crowd.'
very nice

i was surprised by this poem.
dunno why but iwas. :) thanks for sharing

[Hello, Goodbye]

I loved this because I can truly infinitely relate to it.. its very well written... good job..