Differences

They're writing songs of love
Of that I can be sure.
Oh how the delightful creatures consume the green valley
The acts of desperation from some who are a folly.
Entertaining him with tricks of the eyes
Luscious glares paired with sweet demise.
They're writing/expressing themes of love,
That bittersweet thrall of contrast.
They're writing songs of love, but not for me.

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Wonderfully written and much enjoyed by me.

"Entertaining him with tricks of the eyes
Luscious glares paired with sweet demise" :)

Good job and thanks for submitting this to my contest and "Keeping The Dream Alive"!