My smile

Just a poem I wrote.

~MY SMILE~ 

While today it shows

so happy so bright

you know how the old saying goes

my jaw not clenched tight

its because 

not in worry nor fright

me and my friends all abuzz

I see a light

because this is what i was

that gives me strength to win this fight 

Reviews

[Basu Gupta]

That was cool..
I liked the line you popped in between about friends..
it was very entertaining reading that so if you can you should extend it a bit..
my personal view..
apart from this I enjoyed going through it

[The poetic child]

Thank you ... so much for ur veiw i will try to extend it