Internet Observation

You think you know me from four lines
one picture
You act as if you can box me
check again
You think I am as you see me
Yet I am not
You think that because it is just online
You can be mean and cruel
You can’t

I am more than you can know

Remember

Reviews

Very good! You never know who your really talking to on the internet. I liked what you stated. This is really good!

[L.G. Knight]

Strong words... Really well stated and powerful in their simplicity... Nice Job!
I loved these lines
"You think you know me from four lines
one picture
You act as if you can box me
check again"

and the last word "Remember" that was a wonderful finish for it!


~Frances~

[Imperfection]

It's a make-believe world�a world where dreams get fulfilled. But many of us don't wake up until the nightmare begins.

Fine write.
Short but effective.
I like the last sentence�a single powerful word. Almost a warning.

Its so truth when you are online, nothing looks what it seems.