Waiting For You

Hard enough knowing we can’t touch
But now we can’t even talk

Day one
    Lost
    Lonely
    Sleep away the pain
Day two
    Lost
    Lonely
    Worried, if you are ok
Day three
    Lost
    Lonely
    Drink to forget the worry
Day four
    Lost
    Lonely
    Cleaning to clear the mind
Day five
    Just started
    Another
    Lost Lonely Day

Can’t wait until I can touch
Really want to talk

To you
Only you

Reviews

[Solis-Lopez]

wow, that was...deep. o.o repeating that you're lost and lonely and you try to do things to make it go away, that makes it real. i liked it very much. ^-^ it reminds me of when i hated being apart from my boyfriend, and how i still feel that way about him because we can't see each other as often as we used to. awesome writing.

[Courtney26]

hmm. I can relate to this oem so much in my owne way of losing someone I truly loved.

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

i feel the words rise of the computer screne and te power behind them creats an awsome reality that strikes the very heart of what we seek in love! well done

[L.G. Knight]

VERY nicely said! I love this one thanks so much for entering it in the sleepless night contest....

~Frances~

[James Takeo Panton]

This is why I love this girl.....

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I can feel the longing the worry, the sadness in your words.. this is a good poem, it is so sad , thinking of someone going through this .. good write ...

Chloe
xoxo

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This is good. I loved the structure. I think it was unique how you have the days start the stanzas. I liked how you repeated lost, lonely. That really placed some power behind the words. I could feel the sadness as I read. Great work!