Consummate

In short: I love him

Somehow, with such a wild heart

He manages to be gentle.

He's mastered the perfect balance between chaos and predictability.

Like a sunset, he is never the same, 

But every time more impressive.

His pale blue eyes, which pierce others,

Only meet mine with love. 

My broken heart only stops bleeding when I'm with him. 
So my love, if you ever wonder what you mean to me,

you are my poetry.

Author's Note

If a poet writes about you, you are either a perfect autumn day or similar to a tsunami.

Reviews

[Asante]

That last line is piercing -- the perfect way to cap off a wonderful poem.

This is equal parts raw and poetic; straightforward, yet pretty enough. You blend both sides well enough to create a surreal effect with this one.

Rambling aside, I deeply enjoyed!

[Riley Justine]

I love the rambling! Thank you so much for all the reviews :)

[Wild Rose]

Sounds like an autumn day can turn into a tsunami
when you are with him
Of course you love him to set you on fire
That is called LOVE

[Ardra]

Hmmmm...it's beautiful....the ending perfect...
Someone being your poetry... isn't that like.... how breathing is to us... who survive on words...
I am glad I came across this work of yours

[Riley Justine]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed

[Alexa Apothic Red]

This is beautiful and passionately loving! I love the utterings of your raw emotions in this piece!

[Riley Justine]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful use of words dear Riley.
"So my love, if you ever wonder what you mean to me,
you are my poetry."
The above lines . Perfect. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Riley Justine]

Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Riley.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Intensely romantic piece.
Lovely sentiments.
An amazing read!

[Riley Justine]

Thanks for the review :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like the ending here! Also the lines:
"My broken heart only stops bleeding when I'm with him", are my favourite ☺

[Riley Justine]

Thanks for the review!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

The pleasure was mine ☺

[ReedWrite]

Wow...what a beautiful piece!
I love the lines: Like a sunset, he is never the same,
But every time more impressive.

But even more, I love the ending...you are my poetry.
Simply beautiful!

[Riley Justine]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed!