Unearthed Universe

They say the eyes are the window to the soul

When he talks about my eyes

When he becomes alive 

And his eyes are dancing and burning 

As if he has seen 

An entirely new world,

Undiscovered by everyone else...

That's when I feel loved most.

Author's Note

I feel like this one could use a lot of improvement

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Soft, sensitive and wonderful use of words. You made the reader feel the joy. Thank you Riley for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Asante]

You did well enough with this, capturing the essence of feeling appreciated. The feeling of seeing someone adore you before your very own eyes. I enjoyed this, Riley. :)

[Riley Justine]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)