Everything from Nothing

I
am
The

space
within a
blink and an
indescribable feeling
where no word can place the tears

form
softly
the caress
impressing with
my lips to your cheek link
our one's in two, across the sea, from me to

You
are
The

air that fuels my blood
you hold my breath
to bite my tongue
before I speak
what can not say
your stormy eyes, in silence, breaks

strings that pluck upon your harp
vibrate in waves of blue and gray
sync your chords into my heart
arpeggiate our melody
on off-beat notes
to find the ones that harmonize
keys of bone--our temple shrine
engraving songs so purely sweet
in moonstar dreams and symphonies

from our nothingness it seems
everything unites
breathe to realize we've been free
since we first transcended time

Author's Note

You are an instrument of celestial sound and light. You are bound only by the colors you emit and the music that moves you...

I tried to incorporate the golden ratio into the beginning of this piece; each letter character and the latter spaces between them follows the sequence pattern in the ratio (1,2,3,5,8,13, etc). The following stanza accounts for the numbers in-between the ratio (4,6,7,9,10, etc). The rest of the poem details the symmetries found in romances dance.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh what a horrible ending sir!! :) i was so captured by all those lines of not being able to say the words to express those deep, mysterious, serene, positive and spiritual places ... and you put it to death!! arrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh! ;)) we walk away from it too easily and too often don't we!? your poem works on me ..:)
E.

[transentience]

I agree!! It did end badly, I guess my words didnt know where to stop, haha. Whether or not you are serious about the way it ends, I was never keen on it to begin with and now I realize that what is said there would be best suited for another piece. Thanks!

[Einstein Noodle]

oh! i don't know! its a fine twist and we absolutely put those intimate and gifted relationships do an end ..sometimes simply as they can be frightening ... i like it! it is a complete surprise for me .. i did not mean horrible in a negative way at all ... horrific maybe would be better :)

[transentience]

well i changed it anyway! :) It makes more sense (i think) now~

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .......... of course you did :)))))))) love to you my friend!

[Lovecraft]

The second to last verse was fantastic, as was the last verse as well. I had a bit of trouble following the sparser lines but it just took me a few seconds to get used to it.

Whomever said the ending was horrible is sadly mistaken, I thought it was bold and darkly decisive. I like romance tinged with darkness.

Two Thumbs Up!

[Cortana]

Some very nice phrasing. Enjoyed.
I couldn't help notice the comment below so I'm curious about how it ended before.

[Inject Positivity]

Amazing ending... I loved the way your poem moves with different thoughts... The word choices were excellent along with the presentation... A lovely write... It took me to different world of thoughts.... Very well done dear frnd....

Sincerely,
Dhiman