Symbiosis

Says Love...
I will not be moved
by primitive hands
and cold feet.
I am the core.
The eye in the center
of this hurricane.
I am not an instrument,
I am the symphony.
I am not hope,
You are.
I am infinite,
YOU are possibility.
I am that, I am...
Always...all-ways...Love

Reviews

[gabrielle]

"I am not hope,/You are" -- On the first read I felt that this verse do not fit well with the theme but I realized that such line could be telling us that we, humans, have the ability to make an intangible concept, like love, tangible. Very well-written.

[Melinda McQueen]

Such a great write.
Emotion flows throughout it.

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Melinda, thank you so much for stopping by. Nice to meet you :)

[wordman]

the woman is the core of a relationship,the man is the hope and possibilities
and we are what we are,and together we are one in love

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I like that :) Perhaps a possibility for you to write?

[wordman]

maybe we can do a duet

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hmmm...life is full of possibilities :)

[wordman]

your dream is my hope,my hope is your dream

[~]

Powerful statements from the most powerful feeling of all. I love your last line: Always...all-ways - it is important for us to know that love is there forever and no matter what. :D

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Thank you skittlesness :)

[~]

:D you are welcome my dear!

[MsJewel]

Simply beautiful!

:) Julie

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Thank you Julie :)

[AaronFreitas]

I like this one a lot lynn :) Beautiful work :)

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:) I'm glad you liked it Aaron, thank you

[sereenaoutloud]

This is beautiful and strong ...like love is speaking and making its point! We all have the possibility of being loved and giving love!
You captured it perfectly !!

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Awwww, thanks Sereena

[Sami Khalil]

Your words resonate with the core of truth. Beautiful as your style and wording...Excellent.

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Always good to see you Semi. Thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).....

[eglantine]

I would cut the first line since it's already the title. Favorite part: "I will not be moved / by primitive hand / and cold feet."

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thank you :)

[Woody]

aah life would be ugly without love.
always.. all-ways. love this.
sweet one, Lynn.

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Brightened my day to see you by, Woody :) thank you

[Woody]

always my pleasure, Lynn.