Consumers

We are like universes interfacing with each other

And some of us have bigger black holes than others-

Reviews

[David Scott]

Ha! I get it... A bit cynical, but hold at least some truth.
I wrote a poem about black holes too...
Seems modern science thinks black holes may actually be the "engines" spinning galaxies and keeping orbits balanced within their perspective gravitational fields.
Interesting phenomenon.

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lol thank you, dear poet

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh my, this is so true......much bigger black holes....

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[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha! i am so laughing at ....well ...myself ;} great little ditty you have written lynn! ... stinging satire on consumerism .. and packed with wise words ...
E.

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E!!! I love me some E :) So good to see you by my friend ...thank you!

[Einstein Noodle]

love to you too ...big big! :)

[Adam Adams]

Whatsss?? Now I guess, I gotta say, "Hello Lynn... Is this you??" *Chuckling*

This time, you got me speechless cos I wonder what to write in this review box, am afraid If I write anything vulgar, others're gonna get peed. Lol *Joking* - Ooh wai.. wait, did I already just "write" it? Damn!"

I believe, you're kinda right 'bout universal interfacing... it's seemed like love-ebbs that's oft. look same but taste different when it comes to reality from "fantasy". Kinda thoughtful write you've come up with.

Suggestion: You may mark it mature if you want to cos.. your kids may get wrong/bad impression. Haha *kidding*

Keep it up. Your poetry're evocatively refreshing... always an honor to read you!

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Adams...lol...I'm emotionally confused now. You got me blushing and laughing hahahaha Thank you so much, truly!

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-- haha... did ya mark this as 'mature' because of holes, lady lynn...? -- you have a very crazy sense of humour... :p -- but more importantly, this is a stunning piece... social commentary in two exquisite lines... you reall know humans... :p

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laughing...didn't know I marked as mature. Thank you, my dear :)

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-- oh... i'm glad i asked then :p ... and you're very welcome, dear lady lynn... :)