Calcul-us

If only you would see past your subtractions of my additions

we could multiply this fraction beyond the great divide

through a derivative of devotion equal to love

Reviews

[SkinlessFrank]

always thought that math and love are a natural combo

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:) thank you for dropping by, my friend

[Pryde Foltz]

Clever. Very. Do you think the scientific set will ever learn to quantify love? Now there is a challenge::)Again wonderful write, Lynn:)

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I hope so, Pryde :) thank you for your visit

[David Scott]

It should be relatively simply math... Ha.
Fun read.

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Some people make everything complicated. I keep hoping for the best. Thank you for your visit, dear poet

[jacob erin-cilberto]

excellent use of math metaphor in this...nice play on words and topic...

"your subtractions of my additions"

love it.

short and sweet....

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-- oh, this is sheer genius... and now you've revealed the secret for the perfect equation between two dissimilar equals... that's only possible in a brilliant poem... :)

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hahaha thank you my lovely friend :)

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-- the privilege is all mine, my lady... :)

[Adam Adams]

Sorry, am "way" terrible at calculus ... urgh, bloody, derivations!! Ha! Thankfully, it was in school time... not at job or else, I might have been the foremost reason behind "recession". Ha!

Btw, your creativity's appreciable. You played well with words.. I kinda like how you derive love with love-derivations, simplistically. Excellent!

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It's elementary my dear Watson :) thank you again, Adams