Echo

The dusk of thoughts, felt aloof

Where once a spectrum of light

From your presence held home,

In the dark shimmer, minute by

Minute where the sun settled down,

And the trees swayed.

I silently kept my faith,

I loved my sky of

Emerald hue, where clouds in little light passed by

And the sea sang songs, with foam of wisdom

Whooshing against the quay...

Your voice, echoed a thousand times

Where a hundred times you'd say

You are winged my love, follow me and you

Will see, where I just hide at day

 

Reviews

[A hare off]

Quite a beautiful poetic thought. This one felt soft and inviting.

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Thank you for your lovely review :)

[Pryde Foltz]

A truly wonderful piece, Lynn. Beautiful:)

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Thank you Pryde, I'm glad you liked it, my dear :)

[Einstein Noodle]

how beautiful!! feeling a bit jealous of your talent ;) this poem sweeps me away .. so that i want to begin it again and again .. into the library it goes .. well done .. superb stuff says i! .. wow!
E.

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Thank you, E :) I am honored, my dear poet

[Wondering Mind]

multi-layers of thought and emotion, o winged one

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:-) Look what the cat drug in!!! Are you back? Or just popping in? Good to see Wonderer!

[Wondering Mind]

Thanks Lynn. I'm at the cat's mercy; she let me out tonight, so may be she'll let me out again..and again... Good to read good poetry :)

[Adam Adams]

So whose actually hid all at... day? Me or You? I mean... why hide if our bodies calling warthogs of wisdom, undisguised? Ah... u knw wht am sayin'. Lol *kidding*

Anyways... nice poetry. It's actually been quite long reading smth "not-so" erotic from u so.. yea... had a great with ur latest scratch. Lovely. U smell petty gud 4 spirit. Have at ur such prolific stardom! Wonder job.

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Thank you, my friend. Good to see you by :)

[Philip Muls]

Nice play with words, strong imagery. And very romantic.

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Thank you Phillip :)

[wordman]

a full happy life ,now muted.you watch the sky with all it`s beautiful colors and memories .
thoughts emerge as you watch the trees sway just at sunset,the water looks the same as it did before
but maybe you didn`t see it as clear..beautiful imagery and thoughts !

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:) Thank you, my friend, for your insightful review

[emmajoy]

There are two rainbows here: one bright and passionate, the other muted, a little sad.. both there to be looked at and admired for their beauty. Unlike some people you truly respect your thinking and lay your thoughts ready for inspection in such a refined yet passionate way. Sighhhhh...

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((((you)))) Yes, Emma 2 rainbows :) Thank you, my friend for such a beautiful review

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And Emma...happy holidays! I wish you a life of love light and laughter

[SkinlessFrank]

heartbreakingly beautiful....a keeper

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Hi SF :) I'm glad you liked this. Wishing you a happy holiday

[Alias]

so much gorgeous natural imagery. I could read this over and over, it's just enchanting. Really excellent write! Fairytale like, and with a satisfying, lingering ending.

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Thank you so much, my dear :)