Dark

Dark

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His dark mood was calm

And with a look in his eyes

That spoke of patience...

© 2015 ...


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lovely...depicts a depth to his nature with not much room to do so. very well done.

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10 Years Ago

Thank you, Jesse :)
Really great poem For something with few words it speaks so powerfully.

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10 Years Ago

Thank you, dear poet. Appreciate your time :)
hurricane season is it....beware the brooding darkened mood evil is afoot

Posted 10 Years Ago


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10 Years Ago

Hi Terry :) no worries, the sun always rises, my friend
Few words said all... Thank you for sharing my friend!

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10 Years Ago

Thank you Amos, for stopping by and leaving your mark :)
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome my friend...
many facets to this clever write lynn short and sweet to the point. Niiiiiice!

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10 Years Ago

Thanks again, Andrew :)
this is like the calm before the storm...right before the explosion (maybe abuse)

the perspective is perfect...and of course the brevity really impacts.

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10 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob :)
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whoa. such power packed into enviable brevity. one more word added to this would surely diminish its impact. truth be told, i would run run away run away.

ya see, what makes this piece so amazing to me . . . i woulda ruined it w/too many words. my fingers frequently suffer from diarrhea. excellent work, dear poet. scared the 'ell outa me.

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10 Years Ago

Thank you again J :)
i can see him sitting, and thinking
a few words transforms into many images

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10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, my friend :)
 wordman

10 Years Ago

always a pleasure lynn
I really identify with this. I'm a very patient person. Yet I find myself feeling the weight of being patient. An odd contradiction. The best times are when you can actually let go and be beyond the cares. This is a more enlightened type of patience... I'm working on it. Be patient with me. Ha.
Fun to read a new thought from your creative mind.

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10 Years Ago

:0 Thank you, my dear friend
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A very short but somehow intense write. Sometimes one needs only very few words to express a deeper sense of sth. I could easily create an image in my mind. I feel like it's a little cliffhanger poem.

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10 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by, dear poet
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10 Years Ago

You're welcome :)

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Added on December 23, 2015
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