Adoring

The sun loved the moon so much

he died every night

to let her breathe

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

I thought the moon kicked a*s and that's why the sun disappeared. Gee I got that wrong!! Now on a serious note what a lovely poem in so few words, a wonderful romantic poem on the changing of the shifts. Why did I not write this??? Probably because I'm not lynn! lol You have left me lost in space! :):)

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:) you're adorable, and witty, and an excellent poet and thank you, but you were lost in space long before I got here hahahaha

[andrew mitchell]

I did love the Robinsons My fav series" lost in space" when I was a kid. haha I know lost in space! People, I think have this perception that I'm mad but actually I'm not I just love stretching the boundaries with my humour pushing the limits lol being silly, ridiculous, simplistic and just having fun. Some poets won't read my writes because of this haha but who cares if it brings a smile I'm not here to be serious! lol except appreciating other poet's works. your words are too kind lynn thank you.

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And I love that about you, so you keep on making us laugh, Andrew. Laughter is an antidote to all the BS in the world :)

[andrew mitchell]

always been a jester of sorts it's my escape! I love and admire Spike, Sellars, Cleese, monty python, Dave Allen, the late Williams to name a few. Clever writers/ comedians and the mad humour they generated was just hilarious out of this world! lol

[JayceeC]

How beautiful is this. The ultimate gift of love in a timeless circle. I think the story is as old as mankind and the concept of love. Many myths but no one quite knows where the concept comes from.

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Thank you so much, Jan :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the story in the poem. To die for love daily. True love my friend. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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good seeing you, John. Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Lynn.

[Einstein Noodle]

so wondrous the magic of it all! you are getting more masterful every time you write these three line vast speaking and emotive poems .. enjoyed this experience
E.

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((((((((((((((you)))))))))))))))))) you're an awesome spirit, E

[emmajoy]

Breathless writing, gasping appreciation... or vice versa, dear you!

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Thank you, dear emma for leaving your footprints on my page :)

[emmajoy]

My ever always pleasure. :)

[WittyWonka]

Such a gift, this love. Does the moon do the same each night?

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:) thank you so kindly for stopping by

[WittyWonka]

You're welcome. I will take it as a yes, maybe, perhaps?

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[W.k.kortas]

The tightness is enviable; it's tough to do epigrams well, and boy howdy, is this one done well.

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Thank you kindly, sir :)

[David Scott]

Yes... I have felt this masculine necessity to give space. Yet the Sun ever wishes to shine upon the liveliness of the moon...
A very complex thought about the masculine and feminine dance.

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Thank you, Scott

[Woody]

you can't be more succict. amazing as usual, Lynn.

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You're amazing, Woody :) Thank you...

[Ken Simm.]

I was much taken with this Lynn. I can think of many places where this should by written.

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I'm sure you could, Ken :) I'm glad you liked it. Thank you