Adoring

The sun loved the moon so much

he died every night

to let her breathe

Reviews

[Insight "MH"]

Lovely romantic tragedy. I really enjoy small, yet gorgeous poems.

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Thank you so much Insight :)

[A hare off]

Perfect, perfect, perfect. One perfect for each line of this short but beautifully written thought. I wish I had written this. It is so very beautiful. I love the vision you have created.

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Hare, thank you so very much. Makes my heart smile that you enjoyed this little one

[softlyfall]

Incredible and timeless romance, the wheel of life and the circle of love...all in 14 words...wow
Beauty in miniature.

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thank you softly for such a sweet review :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow is this timely...

giving your life for another...and i say it is timely because of the moon tonight..coming home from school i noticed the beautiful orange colored moon...

thank you Sun...
and thank you, lynn, for this image and personification.

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You are so very kind, Jacob. Thank you

[wordman]

a great haiku ,but he comes back in the morning to lite her way,and warm her up
he is so sweet!

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Thank you Ron :)