Up and Out

Sorrow's trees wither,
Neverland birds fly away,
Dream clouds hide not long.

Reviews

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This is well-penned, but it is perhaps a senryu as you have given emotion to nature, personifying it...it is a lovely read, though...

[Treble]

It is? Okay, thank you so much!

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:) yep...and you are welcome... when you write a haiku it has to be just about nature and never included any figurative language

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You can call it a Senryu, though!!! :)

[Treble]

Thanks! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I don't know what to say. It is simply awesome. Nice job. :)

[Treble]

Thank you!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Sure thing :)