Despite the Craters

My auburn heart,
layered in sentimentality,
sinks into the valley of the horizon
and harbors every wondrous thought of you.

Your intentions, I find,
Tend to be gold plated,
But I fall for them every time,
Loving every bit of you.

Every memory of you,
Everything I love of you
Changes the beating of my heart.
And I'm blessed to know such a
wondrous and flawed human being.

Reviews

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craters do not make the moon and are reminders that it isn't perfect...no one is... and to love one's imperfections is to truly love... a creative and well-written piece, Treble

[Treble]

True that. No one is perfect, and that's the most perfect part. :)

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Yes, indeed, the perfection in imperfection makes it all perfect :D

[Creator]

Ah, yes, it is a very beautiful poem. About a crush, or a current relationship maybe? Very well done. I am rating this 100 points sharp! Keep writing. Ps: Danny, thanks for the read requests.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome :) for the request i mean.

[Treble]

Thank you so much! I can't believe I'm getting a rating of a 100!

[Creator]

You are welcome, and yes a 100 point rating. You deserve it. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I agree with Nick. You deserve it. :)

[Treble]

Wow, thanks so much, guys!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Sure thing :)

[Creator]

You are welcome :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Someone's in looooveeee... Lol. Well, jokes aside, this is awesome. A sweet poem of expressing the love you feel for someone. Very well penned.

[Treble]

Actually, I'm 17 and have only had one crush in my entire life. And that's over. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Oh...you could have fooled me. Lol. Nice poem. :)

[Treble]

Thanks! :) You're the best!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome :)