Doesn't love you

When you love someone who doesn't love you back

It's like your heart's breaking a little too fast

When you're trying to let go

but the time just seems so slow

Holding onto something that's not real

while your emotions exaggerate how you feel.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Headache will come. When the love is one-sided. Slow or easy. Always painful. Thank you Annie for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[matrixmark]

Very striking first line, its the one that got me the most. At a time mnay moons ago, this happened to me. So as you can imagine i resonate with this one single line
But now, i know what true love is all about and i am a very happy man.

The words you have used have a truthful ring to them in particulat the last 2 lines. To give everything and recive little or nothing in return is soul destroying.

Did i like this....in a way i did because your words are very truthful and portrays the message across in a clear understandable way.

Mark.