The person you've become

The person you've become

A Poem by Sarah Redigan

The pressure in my chest rises with every word you say
Looking at what you've done discusses me a little more every day
Calming down would take some work don't know if I can accomplish that today

the way you act is like a prison brake
You lost yourself so long ago
don't think you could ever find your way To the loving person we all used to love
I hate severely today

Never thought the person I knew could make me feel this way
The pressure rises in my chest the more I have to stay around u each day
No more secrets will be share between us no more laughs or tears

The person you've become only brings me anger and sadness from this I can't escape

The things you've done are wrong and that I can't ignore
In the feature there's no going back to the friendship I must ignore

Your hatred hurts us all and for this you'll never be forgiven
Hope one day you'll brake away from the hate and lies that have taken you over now

but for the thing I can't ignore,The lies you've become
I can never forget or ignore

Distance is where or alliance will lie forever more

© 2012 Sarah Redigan


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Sad ....... if you feel that way , dont stay

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it. In reading this I captured two different perspectives: you talking to a former friend and you talking to yourself as if you changed and hated it. I'm not sure which one you were going for, but it's accurate either way. It's really beautiful. Well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


it touched my heart. this is such a beautiful poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 8, 2012
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Hi! My name is Sarah I'm a little eccentric at times .. ☆ I am also very sensitive and strong ♡I have a lot of faults and imperfections but I drive on them... I enj.. more..