Love Notes

Love Notes

A Poem by Mortricia
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:)

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Love...

 

This intrument in my chest beats for you

It pumps rhythmic, coppery, sweet for you

The forceful drums and sensual strums

Strike heated chords, soul-deep for you

© 2011 Mortricia


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Ah, this is exquisite! Why on earth has this not received any reviews till now? Such a travesty of justice.
I love how you've described the heart, and its forceful feelings. I've said elsewhere how much I love short, good poems. This is a new favourite :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Thanks guys, I appreciate it! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago
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More than a year and just one review? That's a record. Brilliant poem, and great personification! I loved it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah, this is exquisite! Why on earth has this not received any reviews till now? Such a travesty of justice.
I love how you've described the heart, and its forceful feelings. I've said elsewhere how much I love short, good poems. This is a new favourite :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Get cozy to take a journey through a rhythmic, twisting prison, I'm a metaphoricalien and writing is my mission. "Didja hear about the guy who lost his left side? He's all right now..... more..