I love you so

It talks about how 2 people love eachother

Oh my dear

I love you so

but since you left

I live in sorrow

 

I need you now

More then ever

Please come back

To be with me

Because I love you so

 

Now that your back

Here with me

My heart is now full of joy

And i'm standing here

Telling you that

I love you so

 

You put your finger

On my lips

And told me

I love you so

 

And now for the last time

In our lives

We tell eachother

I love you so

Author's Note

I hope you liked it and if there is something that i can improve on please tell me

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

spelling of sorrow is wrong...
in 1st paragraph just change the line:
"oh my dear..
i love u so much.."
in 3rd para change
"now u are back
here with me"..
thats all:)
except these small errors this piece is awesome..
so nice to see someone in love:)
Keep writing...

[whispereversolightly]

Such a wonderful little write, full of compassion.