You would make it better

Day or night, time or place

Indifferent to previous thoughts displaced

 

A calm and simple night, peacefully relaxing at home

You would make it better

 

An exciting day filled with adventure

New sights, new sounds

You would make it better

 

A dreary day, when nothing goes your way

Plans undone and mood down the drain

You would make it better

 

And even most beautiful of sunsets

Quietly watching the colors dance across the ocean and slowly make its way beneath the horizon

A gentle warm breeze tickling the senses carrying blossoms in the air

You would make it better

 

No thing too big, no thing too small

Without fail you would better it all

 

Spring - you'd make it better

Summer - you'd make it better

Autumn and winter

You would make it better

 

Any day, any mood

Happy or sad, awe or misery

Regardless of feelings before, infallibly

You make it better.

You make me better.

Reviews

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I LOVED this poem. My God, I admire this power of love. It has a "he/she can fix me" energy. Yes, I am living in this poem right now and I want to shout the last words to that person's face. I hope you are aware of the constructive effect your words have. PERFECT

[Trivén]

I'm glad it resonated with you, Beren. I hope it'll remain true.

[emmajoygreen]

'And even most beautiful of sunsets
Quietly watching the colors dance across the ocean and slowly make its way beneath the horizon
A gentle warm breeze tickling the senses carrying blossoms in the air
You would make it better'

Your words start to finish, especially my chosen quote, says it all.

[Trivén]

It's a poem very dear to my heart. Thank you, Emma :)

[Kady R.]

WOOOOOOOWWW!! Triven you have a way with words when it comes to romance!! It reminds me of the Spanish songs I listen to Juan Luis Guerra. Very sweet, simple but to the point. I love this poem!! So wonderful.:)

[Trivén]

Thanks again, Kady. This one is probably the one I'm most proud of, though for me it's quite bittersweet.

[Kady R.]

It's a very beautiful poem. Why bittersweet if you don't mind me asking?

[Trivén]

Well, the would's and want's were unaligned.

[Kady R.]

Ooooooo I appreciate you sharing, very kind of you!! Hopefully all will go well, it's a beautiful poem.