A prickle

A prickle

A Poem by Trivén

A nettle sting some iching may bring
But some itches are not made for scratching
But some are to be tickled and diddled and stoked
Roaringly so, creativity go
To all-time new heights soaringly

A stub of the toe, a painful foe
But some pains you should not immediately rid
Pain of the mind, a story untold
An unread message, an unheard song
Waiting, but fading, for a listen
Mindfully course-correct
Hear youself honestly
To begin to heal what's wrong

© 2025 Trivén


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This is beautifully introspective gentle yet powerful. It speaks to the quiet truths we often avoid, and the healing that begins when we finally listen. Soft, wise, and moving.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Yiipppeeee! Welcome bacckkkk🤗🤗🤗🤗

So happy about this one you uploaded and its so relatable!! "But some pains you should bot immediately rid" and its true there are some pains that help us not repeat those same mistakes/accidents like touching fire ect. I like how you described the type of pains that shouldn't be gone like "pain of the mind, a story untold" this was so heartfelt.

Thanks for sharing!!!🤗🤗🤗

Posted 6 Months Ago



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Added on July 11, 2025
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Trivén
Trivén

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