Freedom

Freedom

A Poem by Trivén

You can't will it to be
It won't if you want

Too bad or too much
Be patient, be kind
Let it be, and it'll be alright.

It will come.

Trust without demand
Confidence in yourself without fear

Freedom to wish
But wishful thinking aside
Abide by you.

Abide.

© 2025 Trivén


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Sometimes the best way to get what you’re hoping for is to stop chasing it and trust it will come when it’s meant to.

Posted 5 Months Ago


A relateable message here.....

Freedom comes from within, so you can't buy it or chase it......

Nice, short poem .....

Thanks for sharing...

Feel free to stop by and review one of my poems...

BB73

Posted 5 Months Ago


This one feels like a quiet whisper to the heart like something you read when you’re trying to hold it together. It’s honest and steady, like someone reminding you that forcing things doesn’t bring peace. I really liked “Abide by you” it’s such a soft but powerful way to say: stay true to yourself. There’s calm strength in your words. It stayed with me after reading.



Posted 5 Months Ago



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Added on July 22, 2025
Last Updated on July 22, 2025

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Trivén
Trivén

Sweden



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