Believe in love?

Can romantic love last forever? No way!

Don’t be fooled by believing in love

If you do, will it last for long?

Not a chance! Please don’t get me wrong

Attractiveness likes temporary magnet

 

Very soon after we can get

What we want and meet what we need

We’ll start looking forward to proceed

Our interest on the new objects…

 

That behaviour clearly reflects

From the way we keep cheating on

Our partner… Is it really wrong?

Nah, I don’t have the answer for that!

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Reviews

[Dara]

It is so easy to get up in the fantasy of love when in reality it is a choice we make to stay and keep it growing. You have put it all together so well in this wonderful write.

[Trong Van]

I totally agree with you Dara. The people remain in long term relationship because they choose to stay and keep it for whatever reasons other than love. We all know the chemistry between any 2 individuals wouldn't last for life time. Therefore "Love Forever" can only exist in fairy tales. Thanks for your review Dara.

[The Lonely Writers Club]

This poem intrigues me... But I feel like its lacking something. Did you experience this?

[Trong Van]

LOL… Do you think anyone comes here & writes about himself and let the whole world knowing that he’s not faithful? Anyway there are things that the people do, but they never talk about and on the other hand there is thing that they keep talking about but they don’t do it or they don’t really mean what they said. After all human is not a faithful creature! Hopefully this can answer your question. Thanks for dropping by and giving your review. Cheers.

[The Lonely Writers Club]

Yes I do actually. Many writers bare their soul even if it isn't honest living but thats what makes us human we make mistakes. On the other hand there are also people who aren't honest even to themselves if its someone who writes about their mistakes and don't own up to it then thats on them. But thank you for responding it was enlightening to read. Cheers. :)

[Trong Van]

Yeah, I think you're right, many writers may use their writings as the confessions. May be one day I will, but for the time being I simply want to use it to highlight some facts that many people don't want to know about. Everything, I write, must be related to someone I know or something that really happens nearby. Thanks for your honest review. Cheers :)