Haiku

At 63 seconds per frame
             He smiles you have ash on your face
                          She feels a lightness of being
                They go inside

Reviews

[Rahul]

Nice haiku you can write one short poem on it too if you want. y=I liked your theme.
great write.100/100

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Light as a feather
bright as a star
being of other-worldly constitution
dimensional shift in motion